Edits time: First panel, first bubble: take out the 'a' before permission. Second panel: I'd add the word 'not' after afraid, though it's okay as it is. Fourth panel: Take out 'in' before here.
Dajamos's friends with the claws under his arms...reminds me of Hafmar for some reason. Maybe it's his "EEK *cling to nearest known friendly*" panic reaction.
I love the proboscis-dog in the background of the last panel. The little details like that are just another reason why this is one of my favorite webcomics of all time.
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