Hey, it's still almost an hour left of this week so guess what? It's another SURPRISEPAGEATTACK! 8D
Sigh, this page has a tiny piece of an example of a problem that I face as a worldbuilder with my stories: So much stuff that's designed never get's to the pages. I can never put the culture of the southern dogs in the comic in detail because it would just distract from the story. Nothing messes with the story. So just as a useless little piece of information you'll never really need anywhere, the southern dogs actually call their leaders by the name "tseeta", but I have no place to explain it in the comic, so Soo just said "ruler".
I think you may have a wrong sentence there. "you're welcome to help" I thought the spike collared guy should "give" Soo help, not Soo "giving him" help.
Hmm, I still don't like Soo. He's talking like it was some cultural artifact, and not a civilization-changing-weapon-we-want-it-back-NOW that was stolen.
I prefer him using 'leader' to 'tseeta' though, since it suggests that the northern dogs and southern dogs use different terms, and he knows it.
Also, is the southern leader wearing a leopard skin?
I love how all the characters have depth. When you think about it, the "bad guys" aren't really bad guys at all; they aren't just abjectly evil, they have their own reasons and motives that make perfect sense. There's no bad guys here, just lots of misunderstandings and conflicting motives.
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