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One clapping , two dancing , nd one widd a floppy ear watching each dog .
C.U.T.E. !! CcccccccUuuuuuTttttttttEeeeee .
I don't know if you still want grammatical corrections, but, I think that in the second text box instead of 'and the hound would stay in their lairs' it should be 'and the hounds would stay in their lairs.' Hope that's somewhat helpful.
It's pretty much nothing though, and it is very understandable anyway so it isn't a necessary correction
But great job with this comic and the translations!
2nd panel: "...and the hounds would stay in their lairs." Hound should be plural~