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Page two.
If you find any grammatical errors or something, please, let me know about it. I'm not good in translating texts into English (and I did translations to this somewhere around midnight) so I trust you about it. ^^"

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~dragonwolfstryde:icondragonwolfstryde: Jul 28, 2007, 7:06:12 AM
"In spite of casualties and suffering, dogs..."

fix that. ^^; typo in the "and" and a missing comma. Looks great! I love the last panel.
*WolfPearl:iconWolfPearl: Jul 28, 2007, 7:39:20 AM
Whoops! This only proves I should never write things at midnight. Bad me.
But thanks for pointing that out! ^^

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~NeoWarriorCat:iconNeoWarriorCat: Jul 28, 2007, 10:12:54 AM
"black stuff"?



Needs something a bit more dramatic. Doesn't have to be cheesy but 'black stuff' just doesn't fit :/

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~SummonerWolf:iconSummonerWolf: Jul 28, 2007, 11:10:32 AM
"Depths".
Beautiful though.

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=SteelFangs:iconSteelFangs: Jul 28, 2007, 5:20:26 PM
Again very good! I love how you make comics and even though this is only 3 pages it's still very good and I love your artwork!

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*WolfPearl:iconWolfPearl: Jul 29, 2007, 2:11:56 AM
Eh, well, I have tried to make up something more dramatic, but the finnish name for it is "Musta Mönjä" which pretty much translates into "Black Stuff". I tried to search for other words meaning stuff that could sound better but my dictionary didn't know any. If you can make up something better, I'm all ears. :) Black Stuff is supposed to be sticky, oil-like liquid that has strongly mutating (and sometimes magical) effect on living things.
My vocabulary is a bit limited. ^^"

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*WolfPearl:iconWolfPearl: Jul 29, 2007, 2:15:04 AM
Oh, another typo. Thanks for pointing it out! ^^

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~NeoWarriorCat:iconNeoWarriorCat: Jul 29, 2007, 4:20:37 PM
Literal translations generally always sound silly. When telling a story, it's more important to get the feelings across rather than stick to the literal script.



So don't be afraid to alter names in the translations in order to give your story more impact. :)

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