And page 58! I felt bad for not uploading a page last week, so it's double page this week.
These last five pages were drawn in quite a hurry as the deadline had already passed and ~Kumiko90 was already photoshopping the first pages for print, but I hope it doesn't feel like a too quick job. They feel a bit rushed to me, but I hope it's not disturbing to read.
And I had no idea how HARD it is to draw fine expressions on a face that doesn't have eyes. Or even distinct eyebrows. It's strange how much I became to miss such things as eyelids when drawing Iralbe on this page.
And THERE ARE TREES! The first real trees in the history of Wurr! Oh, and tell me what do you like about the water? I have never drawn water before, so this was kind of an ass pull. If anyone knows good water drawing tutorials, I'd like to be introduced.
By the way, I still have about 150 pieces of the printed version ready to leave and conquer the world. They'll cost 10 euros each (seems to be about 12 US dollars at the moment). Shipping within Finland will be just 1,60 e, and outside of Finland 5 euros. And since this print is IN FINNISH ONLY (at the moment), if you want me to send you a translation by email or a note, I would be happy to have one extra euro/dollar in the price. If you want the translations on paper, I'll charge 5 euros (since as I lack a working printer, I have to write them by hand, and it also makes the package heavier which increases shipping costs). I accept bank transfers from within Finland, and Paypal from everywhere else (and in Finland too, if there are Finns who like Paypal better). If you want one, slap me with a note. And if you really want to help a starving artist to save some money for school, I can draw you a sketch of your favourite Wurr character with 5 euros to be sent with the comic.
Toi vesi on vähän siirappisen, paksun, näköistä, mutta vaan vähän. o.o Muuten oikein hyvää työtä, vaikka tosiaan näyttää lähellä olevalta pieneltä virralta, mutten ole varma, kumpaa ajat takaa, pientä vai isoa virtaa. En malta odottaa että näen, mitä tapahtuu! *3*
Keskustelen Wurrin ostosta äitini kanssa piakkoin. Täytyy katsoa että se on hyvällä tuulella. Mutta ennen heinäkuun kymmenettä päivää kyllä.
Oh glory, you did such a beautiful job on the water. Especially considering it was your first time doing such. I noticed the trees and was all 'ASGHDASH!" because it excited me. I can't wait for more, and I'm extremely excited for all this. <3
I think you did great on the water, but I think it'll look even better if there was more contrast between the water and the rocks. Also, it looks like it's a small stream right in front of him, not a river that's far away. I little work on the depth will change that. You can do that darkening the water and rocks on the right and slowly blending it into light to bring in that foreshortening. You'll have to do the same with the cliff he's standing on, only there wont be much to shade, it'll just be quick and to the point. Almost a hard line.
Hope that helps. I'm looking forward to Wurr's release!
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