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Tales from the Wild Side

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August 6, 2007
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Updated 22. Aug 2010


The sixth page!

I just realized that this is the longest attempt to draw a comic I've EVER done. I have tried two times before, but never got further than four pages (and even those four took me months to do) and now I'm already going on page number six. Within less than two weeks! I think I'm a fan of my own comic. o.o

And again I ask you to dig up your magnifying lenses and find out if there are any grammatical errors that I can fix. Other than extra F:s in Iacar's speech bubbles.

And that leads to another request. From now on, if you ever spot a line of Iacar, where you see the letter S (or C which is pronounced as S), please, tell me. He has a speech defect and he says all S:s as F:s. ^^

I need more practice with perspective... Iacar is HARD to draw from above.

(And I still need to buy new 02 pen. My old one is dying on these pages...)

Characters and story (c) to me, thanks. ^^
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~FancyG Jan 8, 2012  Student
i think that Iacar's speech pattern gives some life to the story
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!PlanetDisco Oct 28, 2011
"I'll tell more fpefific when the otherf come." Dawww, he's SO cute! I love him already! :3
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~Flameshadow117 Aug 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, lisping wolf! Also, I think you did a good job with the perspective! Though, this was apparently submitted in 2007.... I'm anxious to see how much you've improved since! But I think I'll just have to read through the comic to find out :D
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~yamainu Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just randomly stumbled upon this one and damn !
Judging just from one page it seems really nice. Good lineart, nice coloring and interesting characters ~
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~kosukelovelikepoison Jun 23, 2011  Student Writer
Last panel, grammatically- "I'll *be more fpefific" or "I'll tell you more". It sounds strange otherwise ^_^
You didn't say anything about grammar, just the f's, so I think that's right... if not, just tell me ^_^
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=SladinForever Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
He has a lisp :)
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~kosukelovelikepoison Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
Yes, I know. My sudgestions include his lisp. It's the grammar, the way the sentence goes together, that I'm questioning.
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*CajesTheTabby Jan 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Must be the tusks/ big bottom fangs that are in the way xD
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~Elithyia Jan 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Last panel- I'll tell you more *specifically when the *others come.
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~the-snow-fox Jun 13, 2011
He has a speech problem - he says the "s" sound as an "f," so "fpefific" is the way he says "specific."
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