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Ha, I'm visiting my home now, so I couldn't resist abusing our net connection (while my own one at my student apartment still isn't working).

I was planning to show this page to you later and keep you in tension, but I couldn't keep myself in tension so... The story continues. Much speech on this page, so there can also be many errors in the writing. Please, let me know about them if you can spot any. Comments are very welcome. ^^

(Heh, when I wrote the texts to this page I read them aloud when two of my friends were visiting. We were laughing quite much during Iacar's lines. Love his speech defect.)

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
[Insert neat cover page picture at this point]
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: [link]
Page 7: [link]

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Awesome! I love his speech defect too:XD:

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If there's no CHOCOLATE in Heaven, I'm not going there !!!

Come and visit my gallery [link] WE HAVE COOKIES

"Love is a wonderful thing, but at this point of life..I'd rather go to the opera" - Bree
This getting good! Good work!^^

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I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less i like.
Is it over yet, In my head?
I know nothing of your kind, and won't reveal your evil mind.
is it over yet? I can't win.
It might be "have" instead of "haf" or is that part of his deficite?
Awsome stuff!!!!! :D
Love the facial expressions- keep up the good work!
Panel 2: "-And thif if the only good territory not occupied by anyone ftronger than his pack"
Loving this, matey X3

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"Threaten ME, will you?! Then have some more!"- Foamy the Squirrel

I am smarter than 92.92% of the rest of the world.

Hooray for the big-tooth lisp! And Hafmar looks like he's whimpering and/or yelping in at least two panels...

I don't see any translation errors in this one.
Although there's a missing punctuation between "Gateguard's home pack" and "No one is stupid enough to fight against that."
I think that's Iacar's lisp. (Or should I say "lifp"? :D)
Poor little hellhound pack getting Evicted! looks like the odds are against them!

but very nice job on this!

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"I'm nearsighted and Psychopathic,
but my caseworker says I'm fine"
:fuzzydemon: :chainsaw: =D 8)
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